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 Jong

He inspired to Rick Owen.

He did detail research and he used many Photoshop.

He's motive is building. It is quite good idea. But what is your purpose? 

What do you want to show to public? I don't understand, why the building shape is comfortable to people? You have to fine more reasons.

Binazir
She did many research and she used own pictures.
She did good research order, therefore I can read easily.
But your explain of work is a little bit short. Please more explain on your blog.



Justyna
She uploaded really detail process, and she almost finish.
You did really great work and you used many colors on your work.
I think your color choice was great.



Tracy
she did detail processes and many researches. Her blog is better than me.
But you need to upload artists or designers that they inspired to you. And I want to know why you chose Japanese costume.
Your research was really good organized.



Dawoon
She need to write more explain about each pictures.
Also upload more researches and artists.
But your research was great. And really interesting design.




George
Your work is really interesting to me and subject is unique.
But I think your website is not representative your major Fine art, therefore you have to upload your drawing or your work.



Jihee

I like your researches form variety resources.

But I think you need more text on your blog and more explain about your shoes.

                       But your website have good structure.      

Veronica

She is inspired by popular tale stories thus her subject is quite interesting to me.

And she chose target and size. But I can not see her final pieces and she need to write more texts and explain about works. But her research and patterns really good.

Mo

I can not wait your work! Your works have good idea I think. She was inspired from African clothes. She did great research and design. But when you draw model, you try to draw your own style.

However your design is really good and I think most people will like your design.

Parneet

She did over 20 posts! I am surprised amount of posts. I want to praise about detail researches and processes. But I want to see more texts on your blog.
I like your patterns and unique design.